“OMG!” “AAA!!!” “What happened?” So this is what happened. Dear diarie, just came back to see my cabin group starring in horror, screaming and blocking the doorway. “Whats up?” I'll tell you what's up! I covered my mouth in shock to see a wii u? I wish! A dead body! Blood on the floor and a knife with bood on Emma O’s bed. Everybody staired. Ok… To be honest… That didn't happen! This wasn't worse than that but it was still pretty bad! Ok, here's what happened
Our cabin was messy! Don't think we did it we left it nice and tidy with our beds made anyway Maya's toothpaste was squirted on the floor some sleeping bags thrown on the floor and… There's more! Thing have gone missing and some girls from our cabin there clothes were stuffed in Caitlyn's suitcase while being scaterd on the floor! We tidied it up while being worried. So while freaked out going to sleep was the hardest part Maya said what if we woke up in other people's bunks from our cabin of course. So next morning that never happened. Whewf! After
Breakfast we went back to our cabin. When I walked in every girl including me couldn't help noticing some writing on the ladder leading up to Fyfes bed it said… Kyla Kayla I noticed that lovely handwriting Kayla! Even though we weren't aloud in other people's cabins the girls dragged Kayla in and asked her like 1,000,000 questions HEY! Don't blame me I was trying to stop them. I know Kayla and I had bad moments but I had to believe her! She looked to serious
“No I didn't” she said in a serious voice and a pinch of creepiness. I'm so excited to go home I said excitedly on the last day. What if the creepiness carried on at home?! Naa! That wouldn't happen or would it?
Remember this all happened! Except the dead body part. So… If your ever in a situation like this and if your on camp tell your teacher and if they don't believe you then… SURVIVE! Good luck!
A true story by Abigail Cruz Young
Feedback/Feedfoward: I defently got spooked in that storie have you thought of making more books connected to spookie cabin two. From: Emma
Evaluation: Thanks for the Feedfoward! I'll do that next time. I thought next time I could make my writing shorter but not too short. Maybe instead of 3 sentences about this one thing maybe 1 or 2 sentences.
Here's my planing.